[Critique Group 2] Hi group2. I'm wondering

[Joan Myles]

As far as I know, the schedule has not changed.
Just chalk it up to enthusiasm.
*smiling heart*
jm

On Thu, Jul 13, 2023 at 6:45 AM leonard tuchyner via Group2 <
group2 at bluegrasspals.com> wrote:

> Hi,
>
> I'm wondering  why three people have submitted their  pieces 2 weeks
> early? I thought  we meet on the 27. Am I wrong? Are  pieces due
> today?Just in case, I'm submitting my piece today as well.
>
> Leonard
>
> ----
>
> Enigma Bird
>
>
>
> Little brownish  bird, no bigger than a finch,
>
> sitting on my feeder, with eyes closed shut.
>
> Three feet away, I slide the glass door aside,
>
> careful to make measured, unstartling moves.
>
> I am worried  concerning her wellbeing.
>
> Approaching her cautiously and slowly,
>
> speaking quite softly as I advance,
>
> until my eyes are one inch away.
>
> Still, she remains with sleeping vision.
>
> I delay, not knowing what’s required.
>
> Is she diseased, or just taking a snooze?
>
> Should a finger be offered for  perching?
>
> Without warning, her eyes blink open,
>
> and she flies away straight as an arrow,
>
> without so much as a “Good day to you” --
>
> leaving me  with unanswered queries.
>
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