[Critique Group 2] Hi group2. I'm wondering

[sandrastreeter381 at gmail.com]

Agreed! No worries, Leonard—you’re not wrong.
 
 
Sandra
 
“The meeting of two personalities is like the contact of two chemical substances: if there is any reaction, both are transformed.”
(C.G. Jung)
 
From: Group2 <group2-bounces at bluegrasspals.com> On Behalf Of Joan Myles via Group2
Sent: Thursday, July 13, 2023 10:03 AM
To: sandrastreeter381 at gmail.com
Cc: Critique Group 2 <group2 at bluegrasspals.com>
Subject: Re: [Critique Group 2] Hi group2. I'm wondering
 
As far as I know, the schedule has not changed.
Just chalk it up to enthusiasm.
*smiling heart*
jm
 
On Thu, Jul 13, 2023 at 6:45 AM leonard tuchyner via Group2 <group2 at bluegrasspals.com <mailto:group2 at bluegrasspals.com> > wrote:
Hi,

I'm wondering  why three people have submitted their  pieces 2 weeks
early? I thought  we meet on the 27. Am I wrong? Are  pieces due
today?Just in case, I'm submitting my piece today as well.

Leonard

----

Enigma Bird



Little brownish  bird, no bigger than a finch,

sitting on my feeder, with eyes closed shut.

Three feet away, I slide the glass door aside,

careful to make measured, unstartling moves.

I am worried  concerning her wellbeing.

Approaching her cautiously and slowly,

speaking quite softly as I advance,

until my eyes are one inch away.

Still, she remains with sleeping vision.

I delay, not knowing what’s required.

Is she diseased, or just taking a snooze?

Should a finger be offered for  perching?

Without warning, her eyes blink open,

and she flies away straight as an arrow,

without so much as a “Good day to you” --

leaving me  with unanswered queries.

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