[Critique Group 2] Leonard's comments on Joan's sub

[Leonard Tuchyner]

Joan sub for Feb 23

 

 

Love is everywhere. 

Whereever she   goes  is love.

Love is the vessel and everything that is within it.

it is impossible to be away from love. 

 

Love’s Tea Cup

by Joan Myles

 

blue porcelain curves upward

blue porcelain at the rim

and where I swim I swim

bathed in blue blue porcelain

 

my hands my eyes my upward gaze 

within without and through

the mystery is porcelain

the porcelain is blue

 

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Leonard I. Tuchyner, Author
 
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