[Critique Group 2] Joan's piece for August revised

[Joan Myles]

At 96
by Joan Myles

He‘s outlived his wife

And all the friends

He collected in life

The potted tomato and roses he tends

Are food for deer

These days he depends

On one daughter

For errands pretends

To be mad at his son

For the stance he defends

And the stupid things done

Before his life ends

He’ll read every mystery

The bookmobile lends

But as for his history

His dead wife and friends

96 can’t make amends
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