[Critique Group 2] Leonard's comments on Joan's sub

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Your essence or core is wind. 



It is wind that draws you. 



Wind is the freedom of air to move. 



The way  of evolution isupward, 



as is the drafdt  of wind. 



You take that corridor, 



but  the  horizon keeps moving. 



No matter what you do or how hard you try, you are still a child of the Earth. 



The Earth claims the wind and you. 



But, the horizon moving is a good thing. 



Because it leaves enless possibilities.




 


Joan sub for  September  21




 



 


Elemental



by Joan Myles




 


of course the core



and corridor



 are wind




 


and your nature seeks



the upward flow



the winged way




 


but look



the horizon keeps moving



and the earth claims you too




 


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