[Critique Group 2] Leonard's comments on Brad's sugb

[tuchyner5 at aol.com]

This piece speaks of the coming of morning. 



It is a song of peace 



and the Hope it embodies and brings.  



All of earth’s creatures are involved. 



It is exquisitely described.   



The language is beautiful and poetic. 



It is one of the most hopeful things  you have written. 



Cudo.




 


Brad sub for sept 21




 



 



When Night Ends



C By Brad Corallo



Word count 103




 


As light waxes by degrees



dispersing through the sky's brightening dome



velvet black slowly fades to incandescent blue.



Dawn with finger tips of rose



arrives in all her splendor.




 


Workers prepare prudently for the day's toil.



There is a changing of the guard



Comprising countless classes of creatures.



Awakening families of flora fluidly face thesun.



All this magic orchestrated by the swiftlymoving Earth



harmonious, on her appointed heavenly paths.




 


And perhaps of greatest significance,



hope, like a bright flame



is kindled in the heart once again,



fulfilling a promise as old as humanity itself!




 


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