[Critique Group 2] Joan's comments for November

[Joan Myles]

Darling Friends

Thank you for a lovely evening of poetry, philosophy, friendship. What a
blessing!
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Joan’s comments for November 19, 2020

**Leonard: Fog World

Love the title and the ending, the image of the Good Humor man in a truck.
It’s you, of course, the man busily scurrying to interpret reality, to dish
out only sweetness. Meanwhile you travel through a multi-dimensional world,
offering your fanciful, often flippant view of blind reality. Thank you!

**Val: Images

The world through your “seeing brain”, “dormant eyes” is overflowing with
color and life, movement and meaning. “until morning when I wake”. Another
moving look at the world through faulty eyes, perhaps seeing more than you
realize. Thank you!

**Brad: The Gift

“aligned and freely given//but you have twisted it” the gift of
understanding is mysterious and moving, poignant and philosophical. Thank
you!

**Alice: Hands of ...Grandma Farmer

Love the word play you employ in turning of polent, and making apple
turnovers; spotted hands and spotless kitchen.Your admiration and love
shine throughout the images you paint, the legacy of handing down meaning
and love--even as you hand off your beloved piano. Thank you!
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