[Critique Group 2] Leonard's commens on Val's pieces

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Marvelous Description  of the relationship you have with an old songand  an artist.






 




Dreamsong





Valerie Moreno





4-19-20






 




Dark fear





comes like acidwaves





Wonderful Description.






 




until the soundof ajangly





guitar and voicesas familiar  as my own





bring release.






 




Music can have the power to do that.






 




I react





to the sound of





clear singing Iheard years ago, yet





it's still here,after 50 years have passed.





We soar!





An Song can havethat effeft. 





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A beautifuleulogy. For a friend who died suddenly. 










 


On Loss...Again




 


I just found out 



you died!



No answers tohow, why--



just stone-coldtruth.



The style hereis cold and stark.




 


Memories flood mymind of us



as teens, goingto crazy movies--



Young Frankenstienand High Anxiety.



Laughter followedus everywhere,



even at Mass orwriting classes.




 


We prayed onRetreat, talked out our fears,



sharedconfidences over Peanut Butter shakes.




 


Now, you're goneand I hold



memories likesacred flowers.



Goodbye, my friend.



Send yourlaughter in



a billowy, cottoncloud




 



 


this is  my favorite verse.



Some of myfavorite lines are:




 


Memories likesacred flowers.




 


Send yourlaughter  in a billowy, cotton cloud.




 


In memory of



Arlene Casey
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