[Critique Group 2] Leonard'scomments on Joan sub Aug

[tuchyner5 at aol.com]

I love the line, Close your eyes and open your heart. 

When you close the eyes, if you know how, you cansee , really see.  

It comes slowly, like a whisper on the wind.  

Something that has been waiting for you tonotice.  

It comes as you relinquish  your sight and everything that comes with it. 

The preconceived notions of what you think yousee, 

but is only what you were taught to see.  

Finally, like a pulsing window screen, the  trueseeing opens up to you.   

So, by closing the eyes you open up to the truereality. 

But, it is only a glimpse. 

Only a glimmer.

 

 

*Close The EyeAnd Open

 

Close the eye and open

 

The heart

A word

Upon the wind a whisper of waiting 

Shivers drawing near

Light glints and wavers

A pulsing window screen

 

Close the eye and open

 
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