[Critique Group 2] My Piece for October 25th Pasted and Attached

[Abbie Taylor]

I DREAM of FLORIDA

When the world caves in around me,

I retreat in my mind

to my happy place on a beach in Jupiter,

feel the sand between my toes,

as I walk alongside the water,

delight in the cool spray of waves that wash over my feet,

enjoy a picnic lunch

while a refreshing ocean breeze

caresses me amid cries of seagulls,

watch the tide carry my troubles away.

Then my heart will blossom once more.

-- 
Abbie Johnson Taylor, Author https://abbiescorner.wordpress.com 
http://www.abbiejohnsontaylor.com abbietaylor945 at gmail.com Order my new 
memoir at http://www.abbiejohnsontaylor.com/memoir.htm
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