[Critique Group 2] Leonard's comments re: Alice

[tuchyner5 at aol.com]

I like the idea of a memory garden. There are so many different ways to keep our ties to our roots and what has grown from them over a life time. For many of us, plants are touchstones for memorial.  I can remember so many things about growing things since the time I was a toddler. They connect me to my family as do your plant memories.    We could palaver about our individual memories probably for a long time.

Once within a much younger year,

I had the idea of finding wild violets in a wood

and transplanting them at home.

Of course, my dad and I went violet hunting,

harvested some of the purple flowers

from a wooded spot alongside Highway 163,

on a memorable Hoosier hill.

Uncertain of my plan,

my dad still was a stealth accomplice.

 

At the inset of the southwest corner of our home,

·        What is an inset corner?

shaded partly by the soft maple

on the other side

of the curving, white-rock driveway

was one of our three wells.

A concrete, rectangular frame

with a six-inch-deep cement lid

formed the base for the four-foot high,

old iron water pump

that my father painted the same bluish green

that he painted the foundation

of our "Heartland" house,

built in 1914.

·        I’m curious to know what the foundation of the house was made of. This has nothing to do with the poem, of course.

 

Since city water lines

had come into our rural area,

we did not have the same needs for the pump.

When city cousins, with eleven children,

came to visit from Kankakee, Illinois,

the wild eleven were

fascinated with our pump

and worked the handle more in one day

than it had been used in three months of a summer.

 

With sidewalk to the east of the pump

and unsodded grass

·        What is unsodded grass?

around the other sides,

the knoll was the perfect spot

for my transplanting

the wild violets--

violets for remembrance.

 

Borrowed from an Indiana wood,

these violets flourished

for many years

to the north of the old pump

and below one of my bedroom windows.

 

Now, on my front porch

and behind my townhouse,

I tend a summer garden

of sixteen containers;

among these are

three containers of rosemary

because rosemary, too,

is for remembrance.

 

 

POST-SCRIPT:  Do you wonder what brought to my mind this patch of violets?  A few weeks ago, my friend and former colleague Sue (who is also a "master gardener" and a consistent supporter of my blog) sent me a card on the front of which was a watercolor painting of forget-me-nots (the state flower of Alaska).  These forget-me-nots prompted me to think of the violets detailed in this poem.  Thank you, Sue, because I had not thought of this remembrance of violets for many years.  Now, I have added another piece to the recollection puzzle of my "home in the Heartland"--in Blanford, Indiana.

 

            The unusual bluish gray-green color of paint was my dad's creation by mixing together all of his leftover paint.  Fortunately, his mixture was a sufficient amount for the entire foundation and the pump.  I always liked this color which my dad created.

 

            Besides the three rosemary plants, this summer, my container garden includes two Italian basil plants, one purple sage, one spearmint plant, two lavender (herb) bushes, two white geraniums, three pink geraniums, and two lavender geraniums.  I greatly enjoy tending and giving "tours" of my container garden.  Of course, Willow, my fourth guide dog, is my gentle and wonderful assistant.

 

            Finally, I, a resident of Wisconsin for twenty-seven years, will share with you the coincidence that the state flower of Wisconsin is the wood violet.

 

God bless your home and heart this summer!

Alice and Leader Dog Willow (who has never yet set paw in my beloved Indiana)

 

August 15, 2018, Wednesday

 

 

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