[Critique Group 1] Leonard's comments onDeAnna sub Aug

[tuchyner5 at aol.com]

Quite amusing. 

Good rhyming.  Cute,,clever. 


It’s a commentary on the virus andthe   use of masks and social distancing,

seen from the point of view  of a canine. 

To enzo, the walks aren’t fun anymorebecause of those things. 

 

oem,73 words

 

ThePuzzle

ByEnzo, 

 

Humansare such a puzzle.

Theydo many things confusing.

Mylady wears a muzzle.

Itis not at all amusing.

 

Eachtime we go out the door,

Doesshe fear she might bite someone?

Good one.

Shenever did that before.

Good rhyme between door and before.

Wewalk but we don’t have much fun.

 

Otherfolks wear muzzles too.

Perhapsthey know showing their teeth,

Good rhyme between know and  showing.

Isquite a rude thing to do?

Good rhyme between  too and do.

Muzzlesmight hide smiles beneath.

Good rhyme   between might and hide. 

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