[Critique Group 1] Comments for Kate

[Mary-Jo Lord]

You Got Eyeballs In There?

 

This was well written and interesting. I enjoyed reading about all of the
attractions and restaurants in Williamsburg. I didn't find any sentence
structure mistakes or over usage of words. Grace's salad sounded interesting
and a challenge to eat.

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