[Critique Group 1] Comments for Deanna

Mary-Jo Lord mjfingerprints at comcast.net
Thu Sep 15 22:50:11 EDT 2016


Summer's Last Ride

 

I like the repetition of "Don't ever stop" and then "Now you must stop". I
could feel the rush of a girl racing on a pony.

 

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