[Critique Group 1] Feedback for Terri

[Mary-Jo Lord]

MONASTERY, AN ACROSTIC

 

This is a really good acrostic. I like the rhyme in some of the lines such
as, light and night. There are a few of these lines throughout the poem
which give it a musical feel without letting rhyme take over the poem and
take away from the subject.

 

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