[Critique Group 1] critique session 7/27/16

[sitting.duck at springmail.com]

rather than send my piece for critique to everyone separately, I thought I would just send amsg to the group to see if you got it.
if I don't here back from you, I will assume you didn't get either msg and send my piece to you in a personal email.
the name of it was the chicken the egg and me.
cleora