[Critique Group 2] I'm sending this the second time in case you didn't receive it

[tuchyner5 at aol.com]

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From: tuchyner5 at aol.com
To: group2 at bluegrasspals.com <group2 at bluegrasspals.com>
Sent: Thu, Feb 17, 2022 8:40 am
Subject: it's time

He group2,Today's the day to get your  submissions in. Min is below.------

An Unexpected Flower 
 
  
 
Such a torrid day to sell my blossoms, 
 
waiting in the shade of my flower counter, 
 
in the center of a city fair, 
 
to hawk my very nearly wilting blooms. 
 
  
 
Beside me was a water pitcher
 
to help me through the thirsty day, 
 
when I saw a shriveled woman
 
gasping from the withering weather, 
 
dressed in a green and reddish dress, 
 
as though she was a fragile flower 
 
and gazing at my water beaker.
 
  
 
Then I turned to tend a patron. 
 
When I returned the lady was gone. 
 
But in my pitcher was a red plant,
 
quickly reviving from dehydration.
 
Befuddled and slightly bemused, 
 
I turned to a shopper’s purchase. 
 
When I refocused, the plant was gone 
 
and the green and red-dressed lady was back,
 
looking crisp, refreshed  and vivacious. 
 
Regarding my empty water glass she spoke,
 
“Thanks, I needed that!”

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