[Critique Group 2] Leonard's comments on Joan's sub

[Leonard Tuchyner]

I wonder if this is a true story.

It is very sad. 

He’s outlived everyone. 

Has one daughter left.

Has  disowned his onlyson.

Which he defends.

For stupid reasons.

It is too late for him to maked things right..

 

At 96

by Joan Myles

 

he‘soutlived his wife

andthe friends 

hecollected in life

 

thepotted tomato and roses he tends

feedmostly deer 

thesedays he depends

onone daughter

 

forerrands pretends

todisown his son

thestance he defends

andthe stupid things done

 

beforehis time ends

he’llread every mystery

thebookmobile lends

butas for his history

hisdead wife and friends

At 96he can’t make amends 

 




 
 
Leonard I. Tuchyner, Author
 
https://www.dldbooks.com/tuchyner/

 
  
 
 

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