[Critique Group 2] Leonard's comments on Val's sub for March

[tuchyner5 at aol.com]

Beautiful. 

Love is always there. 

Able to be felt regardless of the obstacles. 

It may seem far away, but it always manages to flow in. 

Of course, one must remain receptive.  

Just knowing it is there carries you through any problemsyou may be having. 

A  principle to liveby.

 

Present

 

You are present

sunshine warming ,

even behind clouds.

 

I know your voice

through rushing winds

with waters too high.

 

I listen from distance

that can only reached

by the sound of your name

or dream visit you make.

 

Love present,

soft, clear

remains beyond flows in

ribbons of silver light forever.

All the darkness in the world cannot extinguish the light ofone candle.
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