[Critique Group 2] Leonard's comments on Vals sub

[tuchyner5 at aol.com]

Someoneis leaving. 



Afinal fairwel. 



Whois he or she. 



Is itdeath? Or just the passing of a season? 



Yusay it is a fall tour. 



Butit sounds more than that.  



It isa fairwel again. 



Somaybe it is only a tour. 



Youexpected this leaving, whatever it is.  



Thereis no opportunity to say goodbye.  



Sheis walking off stage. 



Samequestions. 



Whoeever it is, she means a lot to you. 



Yoursoul aches because of the loss. 



You anshe are  alone. 



Isuspect you feel the aloneness more. 



Butshe walks off singing. 



So, Iamleft to believe she is going on a journey. 



Shehas no idea how you feel about it. 



Maybeshe was only with you for a few seasons. 



Again.She is so much a part of you. 



Woveninto your fabric. And her leaving is devastating to you. 



I thinkit is a very dear  person. 



Herleaving seems like it is permanent.  



Thisis a beautiful goodbye. 



Soheartfelt. 



Slo anddevastating. 



Shetakes your sunshine and breath with her. 



Itdoesn’t get any better than this.





 


Val subg for MayF




 


fairwell




 


Just read IWhat does this mean.




 


you're bidding us



fairwell with a final



Fall tour again.`



Oh, no!




 


I knew



this was coming,



as surely as Summer



closes her bright door



too soon!




 


What is



this agonizing loss



as you walk offstage now?



So harsh soul aches,



alone.




 


You are



part of my life,



fabric woven in dark and light.



Goodbye, you wave, singing.



Do you know my



soul aches?




 


You are



Summer, Winter,



magic and wonder new



snow falling, dreams warm in sweet night.



Stay! Stay?



spiritwind at pmpmail.com



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