[Critique Group 2] Joan for April
Joan Myles
jmyles63 at gmail.com
Thu Apr 15 11:25:49 EDT 2021
Desert Rain
by Joan Myles
three people head into the desert
the old man’s pockets bulge with souvenirs
the young man’s pilsner is never empty
the woman lives two thousand miles away
three people in cellophane overcoats
the old man’s love strangles his heart
the young man’s love juggles tulips and thistles
the woman’s love peers through a telescope inward
three people treading solitude
the old man is filled with remembering
the young man is filled with forgetting
the woman is filled with being
three people head into griefs desert
side by side without seeing
without hearing without knowing the others are there
because the rain is too dense
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