[Critique Group 2] Emailing: 3-19-20 Group 2 session

[James]

3-19-20 Group 2 session

1. Leonard's piece:

And unfortunately, Charles has good reason to be silent in my opinion. When
I commented on this previously, I observed that it is clever. Now, I will
say that it is devilishly clever! The vehicle of the story: 2 angels (one
new) discussing all of humanity's mistakes, irresponsibility and their lack
of respect for our beautiful blue planet. Not to mention what the result may
be. Love the Jewish angel, not to mention He/She/Both and their attempts to
fix/change the species! 
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2. Alice's piece:

"Social distancing" I thought that is what everyone is already doing with
all their online lives. I don't love these catch phrases, spawned by our
current often ridiculous world occurrences. But I really like Alice's
description of what writing poetry does for her. I must say, when I am
evolving a poem or unrolling a story, the rest of the world doesn't seem to
matter too much. Isn't it wonderful?
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3. Joan's piece:

The 6 bird echelon breaks down to: 3, 2, and 1. If the "1" is a seeker, so
must the 5 others be. So the 3 choices or actions of each contingent,
parallel the choices many of us make in life. Is it the one who goes on
longest and the one who goes farthest the one who finds the pot of gold? For
"gold," read wisdom.
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4. Valerie's piece:

This is a beautiful tribute or Minnie elegy for a newly lost dear friend.
The pictures are vivid. I can almost taste the peanut butter shake. Not a
wasted word. The title rings with weary irony!  
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