[Critique Group 2] Leonar's comments on Brad's piece

[tuchyner5 at aol.com]

Cast off the lastvestiges of your cocoon,

You are ready  for a whole new life. 

You have beengoing through a metamorphoses   that maybear little resemblance to what you are becoming.

 

Let the brilliantcolors come to adorn your wings 

Be braveenough to let beautiful colors  adornand  perhaps even give them the magic offlight.

 

Allow your selfto be borne up on soft spring breezes 

Feel the ancientjoy deep within you

 

The wholeprocess is one of expansion.  The wordsare expansive.

 

Expanding!

Rise and soar,unafraid!

You are toldnot to be afraid to rise and soar. 

This is whatyou were born to do 

even thoughyou may not have known it. 

 

For, truly, it isnever too late

That is thepromise! 

You can feelthe swelling in your heart  with itsboyand language.  

That  is a promise. 

 
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