[Critique Group 2] Leonard's comments on Joan's pieces for Feb

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Reflections




 


Yes my head is in the clouds



And  my feet reside there too




 


That makes you completely , irrevocably in theclouds.  



Excet for yur eyes.  



What does it mean to be in the clouds. 



Usually it means you are not dealing withreality as most people see it. 



Your taking things in the best way possible.  



Not in the way it is.




 


My eyes are another matter entirely



My eyes are fixed on the mirror




 


What does one see in a mirror. 



A reflection of self.




 


Suspended in mid air



And etched into the moon’s face




 


It doesn’t have any foundation based on what most people see asreality.




 


Clouds shift and configure themselves




 


What you see there is  changeable. 



There is nothing solid, 



but it is totally dependent  on  theconditions. 



Are you saying that you are that way. 



You see what is required.   



The clouds are shaped by wind and rain.  



Are you shaped like that. 



Are you shaped like conditions demand. 



Is this something like going with the flow.




 


According to the wind and rain




 


And my reflections




 


Configure me 




 


What your reflection sees is the wayh you areconfigured 



in the same way that the clouds are configuredby the wind and rain.  



They can take any shape to fit the need. 



When the wind says to be capable of holdingwater 



for later drenching, 



they do so. 



And so the clouds are completely  understood by the powers that shapethem.  




When she sees , 



what is to be seen is only a feeling of how orwhat to be. 



So she conforms with her imagination of  who or what she is  



Her feet and head are also in the clouds. 



Her own understanding of who and what she istells them what to do  



as well. 



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