[Critique Group 2] For August session

[Joan Myles]

Darling  Friends,

I know, I know...I was quick to send in my poem for August, too quick I
suppose.

Because I would like to offer the below for your thoughts.

Thank you for your patience and your thoughtful reading.
Blessings,
Joan

*Close The Eye And Open

Close the eye and open

The heart

A word

Upon the wind a whisper of waiting

Shivers drawing near

Light glints and wavers

A pulsing window screen

Close the eye and open
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