[Critique Group 2] Joan for August

[Joan Myles]

Dear Colleagues,

I'm sending along this piece hot  off the presses so to speak, looking
forward to your thoughts. A bit more structrued for my part. Q: Who is the
Faithful One in your mind

Blessings,
Joan
***The Faithful One

Shoeless

Light approaches

Peace

Elusive plays

Blueness

Silent coaxes

Please

Claim your place


Breezily

The daisies whisper

Iris glistens

Lilies dream

EasilY erect

She listens

Intently follows every beam


Humming

Winging

Buzzing

 Singing

As nimbus gathers

Veils the sun

I withdraw

My spirit lingering

Ever near the Faithful One
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