[Critique Group 2] Emailing: Critiques for Group 2-4-25-19

[James]

Critiques for Group 2-4-25-19 

1. Val's piece:

In 21st century America, there are seemingly multiple groups of "throw away
people." It is certainly a crime to be poor in the US. We have failed
miserably in demonstrating valuing our older citizens. Racism and homophobia
are still very much alive. Not to mention the disdain which so many have
toward immigrants.  In this society, we are quick to judge. Some people seem
to be sure that white Anglo-Saxon protestant males are the only true
Americans. A thoughtful and thought provoking piece. 
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2. Joan's piece: 

A reflective and personal piece which addresses the loss of loved ones. I
have lost many and it is never easy. Nor is it the same. Each loss is
different. It is one of those things that only time can mute; though never
fully. Not sure I get the part about the "southern woman." This piece is
quite effective in expressing sorrow.   

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3. Leonard's piece:

At first the title sounded a bit strange. But "leaves' whispers" really fits
the things that long past leaves might whisper as they participate annually
in the death and rebirth cycle of our planet. As always, Leonard has
sculpted some superb imagery. An appealing tribute to the Earth's wondrously
different seasonal identities.  
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4. Alice's piece:

A truly wonderful tribute to writing and reading. Writers create word
portraits which enrich the lives of others who read them. The piece also
highlights the importance and uniqueness of books. May they never be
replaced! I like this one a lot!
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