[Critique Group 2] critiqu notes for 2-27-18

[Abbie Taylor]

Hi Valerie, the playback number is 641-715-3378. The access code is 
339052. Our next meeting won't be until April, since most of us, myself 
included, will be busy this month. Thanks for your feedback.--Abbie


On 3/6/2018 8:41 AM, Valerie Moreno wrote:
> Critiques for group two, 2-27-18
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> *Sorry so late! What's the next critique date? What is the correct
> playback number?
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> Abbie:
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> Sweet gift poem for a special nephew! It's cute, loving and
> appreciative. Good piece!
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> Alice:
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> As always, a lovely piece filled with "vivid vocals" of springtime woven
> together by picture and sound. Beautiful!
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> Brad:
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> Welcome back!  This is a surreal piece on two levels. The group watching
> the sun set and a glimpse of time bending. The comments between you and the
> man make it ironic.
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> Beneath that, there's a sense of the sun has set--older pondering time
> as a reality, but the "inner" features of time--what is it and does it go?
> Charmingly provocative!
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> Leonard:
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> Exquisite! Five there watching, you are caring for them. The scene with
> the horse and you is so telling--one accepted you and let you all you did
> was noticed. Hope this goes in M&L.
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> *Thanks so much--I love you!
>
> Val
> _______
> I'm learning to fly around the clouds/what goes up must come down.
>    -Tom Petty

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