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[James]

When Love is Finally Poisoned
C By Brad Corallo
Word count 158

Always appearing in impossible, wondrous aspects;
that I no more might resist
than a junkie's craving vein,
 could resist the needle.
I call upon the Gods: "great  architects of creation, release me from my
Calypso, my Siduri, let me be free." 
Like the former she plied the shuttle and like the latter she isolated me
with her irresistible gifts.
In a special place where I finally began shaping  timber for the vessel of
my odyssey; Birds of prey tore my  flesh at the leaving.
 Fare well my heart, you will not accompany me on my appointed voyage.
Alone I go, without a map , without belief
 seeking my singular fortune. 
Aided by the wise counsel of blind women.
I walked on water. 
I trod the path of white hot embers.
Ultimately born up by the air.

Who among us could have ever imagined, such an arriving?

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