[Critique Group 2] My submission for July 26th

[Abbie Taylor]

I know it's a little early, but I'm sending this poem to Magnets and Ladders for its fall/winter issue. It was inspired by the song, Breath of Heaven, which I'm include a link to a video of below. 
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FORSAKEN VIRGIN

She stands, alone, cold, weiry. 
No one believes the Word of the Lord as spoken to her. 
Why was she chosen to bear this Holy Child? 
Must she do this alone? 
Will Heaven help her?

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  httpsccmddyoutube.com/watch"v_kLbleh_475FKJWQ

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