[Critique Group 2] My Submission for December 27th, Pasted and Attached

Abbie Taylor abbietaylor945 at gmail.com
Thu Dec 20 11:36:37 EST 2018


Well, it turned out that I had more time this morning than I thought I 
would, so this poem is different from the one I'm taking to my other 
group meeting this afternoon.

***

HE Was HAPPIEST

not while at his computer,

hunting and pecking with his good hand,

not when stretched out in his recliner

or sitting in his wheelchair outdoors,

not while talking on the phone

or in person with people he knew,

but when snuggled in bed with me,

his good arm around my waist,

his head next to mine on the pillow.

-- 
Abbie Johnson Taylor, Author https://abbiescorner.wordpress.com 
http://www.abbiejohnsontaylor.com abbietaylor945 at gmail.com
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