[Critique Group 2] my hauntingly awful error!

[Alice Massa]

Dear Group Two Writers,


     The Ghost of Language Past and the Spirit of Dictionary Present  
brought me to my senses as soon as I got off the phone with you all 
tonight.  "Faraway" came to me like a vision--with no hyphen.  To 
confirm that Abbie and Valerie were correct and that my hyphen was in 
error, I consulted my Franklin Language Master. Indeed, "faraway" is 
written as one word--without a hyphen. Whoops!  Sorry!  I can foolishly 
only blame my error on my having had no time for supper.


Thanks for a very nice evening of sharing thoughts on writing!

More soon--Alice