[Critique Group 2] My Poem for October 31st

[Abbie Taylor]

What's Damaged?

my garage door after a big black truck crashed into it. 
A little girl in the back seat, about four or five, 
left alone while parents were in the day care center next door, 
could she, in her eagerness to be in the driver's seat, 
have put the truck in gear, 
driven up my driveway, proud as could be, 
slammed into my garage door, 
then leaped back into her seat? 
She says she didn't, 
but only she knows the truth. 
Will she carry her secret to the grave?

Abbie Johnson Taylor, Author http://abbiescorner.wordpress.com
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