[Critique Group 2] Val's poem: Calamity
Alice Massa
ajm321kh at wi.rr.com
Sun Nov 27 13:48:27 EST 2016
Hello!Leonard, Abbie, Brad, and Valerie--Although I just sent to you a
forward of Valerie's poem (upon the request of Leonard), I will try to
paste her poem below so that you may also have her poem without the
layers of forwards.I did send Valerie an e-mail about this happening
earlier this morning.
Hoping to talk with you all on Tuesday evening,
Alice
Calamity, Acrostic
Valerie Moreno
Can this be happening
After I was so sure...
Life just punched a gaping hole
Along borders of resolve,
Making me sad, sick at heart,
Incredibly vulnerable.
This is hard, defeating,
Yet, I dare to hope regardless.
date of Val's e-mail:November 13, 2016
-------------- next part --------------
An HTML attachment was scrubbed...
URL: <http://bluegrasspals.com/pipermail/group2/attachments/20161127/d1c79083/attachment-0001.html>
More information about the Group2
mailing list