[Critique Group 1] submission revision

[sitting.duck at springmail.com]

If you have time, please critique the following revision of the poem instead of the one I sent on the 14th.
I wish I had waited to send my submission to portolono. But, I thought the deadline was last wednes. Then I read all the email and found out it was the 23rd.
oh well, sigh
looking forward to your toughts
cleora

tiny acrobats 
seeking a satellite home
decide on my tree