[Critique Group 1] Leonard's comments on Cleora's sub.
Leonard Tuchyner
tuchyner5 at aol.com
Thu Dec 29 11:06:09 EST 2022
Cleoras sub for Dec 22
This is a cute take of “The Night Berfore Christmaass,
or sort of.
A simple Christmass wish.
Nutriberries
. After all, what else could a bird wish for.
The bird flying up the chimney reverses Santa’s coming down the chimney.
Have you thought of having a christmass card of Dustywith her elpasso nutriberries?
Dusty's Christmas Wish
by Sly Duck
twas the night before Christmas
when all through the yard,
not a cat stirred,
not even a dog barked,
as Dusty perched by the chimney
to watch for Santa.
He chirped and whistled
he whistled and sang.
but no Santa came.
He dropped down the chimney,
and flew to his cage.
A bad little bird I've been, he mourned.
I should have known I'd not get my wish.
then he looked in his dish,
and to his delight,
there lay 3 El Paso Nutriberries.
Our wish for all
is that your Christmas be merry.
Leonard I. Tuchyner, Author
https://www.dldbooks.com/tuchyner/
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