[Critique Group 1] Leonard's comments on Cleora's sub.

Leonard Tuchyner tuchyner5 at aol.com
Thu Dec 29 11:06:09 EST 2022


Cleoras sub for Dec 22

 

This is a cute take of “The Night Berfore Christmaass,  

or sort of. 

A simple Christmass wish. 

Nutriberries


 

. After all, what else could a bird wish for. 

The bird flying up the chimney  reverses Santa’s  coming down the chimney.  

Have you thought of having a christmass card of Dustywith  her elpasso  nutriberries?

 

Dusty's Christmas Wish

by Sly Duck

 

twas the night before Christmas

when all through the yard,

not a cat stirred,

not even a dog barked,

as Dusty perched by the chimney 

to watch for Santa.

He chirped and whistled 

he whistled and sang.

but no Santa came.

He dropped down the chimney,

and flew to his cage.

A bad little bird I've been, he mourned.

I should have known I'd not get my wish.

then he looked in his dish,

and to his delight,

there lay 3 El Paso Nutriberries.

Our wish for all 

is that your Christmas be merry.

 

 




 
 
Leonard I. Tuchyner, Author
 
https://www.dldbooks.com/tuchyner/

 
  
 
 

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