[Critique Group 1] Critiques for August 2022

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I'm also wondering. Did I miss something?
There were notes for Marsha and Sally, but not for me and Leonard.
Cleora

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Deanna,
Thanks for your comments. Are you sending your notes early because you won’t be on the August call?
Marcia
 
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Marcia,
The only thing I could find to correct was: “the call was costing me six dollars a minutes, there shouldn’t be an S on minutes.
I am not sure this chapter advances the story much, except to give a little background color to why Veronica seems shallow. She learned to take care of herself first from her mother. Good work.

Sally,
Repair n organ, needs an a before the letter n.

DeAnna Quietwater Noriega
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