[Critique Group 1] Leonard's comments for Sept. Sub.

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I thinkthis is good   



Iwouldn’t  change anything.  



Iespecially like the end . 



I like theway it draws you into the kitchen  



and offersto share your experience.  



It hasasense of sympathy and familliearty. 




 



 


 



BACK COVER



 



This is asmall book for the small hours when we sit alone in the dark or feel as thoughour grief isolates us.  Although we all travel sorrow’s path at some pointin our lives, many of us walk that road alone and bewildered, failing to reachout to grasp the waiting hand of a fellow traveler.  In the monthsfollowing her husband’s sudden death, Sally Rosenthal explored her reactions toloss and came to realize that strength is a synergetic wisdom woven from thelove passed on through the examples of relatives and beloved animals.  Inpoems and prose, she shares what she has learned about survival andresilience.  Sit with Sally at her kitchen table and share the journey.




 



 


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 Sallysub for sept part 2



I say thesame ting for this  part as I did for thefirst  back of cover piece.  The book has jujst the right feeling as presented in this brief and effectiveintroduction.  



I lookforward to reading  it.




 


                                               ACROSS MY KITCHEN TABLE



 



Shared onlyamong friends for years,



My poemsnow travel to strangers.



Not withouttrepidation, I offer each one



As I woulda cup of coffee to a guest,



Hopingwords will heal broken hearts



While weunravel our webs of grief.



 




 


LeonoreDvorkin asked me to write the back cover for my book, Peonies In Winter: AJourney Through Loss, Grief, and Healing, which will be published before theend of the year.  Below is the first thing that will be on the backcover.  I would like some feedback.  Would reading this on my amazonpage, web page, etc. make you want to purchase the book?  Part 2 will beemailed separately.



 



 



 



BACK COVER



 



This is asmall book for the small hours when we sit alone in the dark or feel as thoughour grief isolates us.  Although we all travel sorrow’s path at some pointin our lives, many of us walk that road alone and bewildered, failing to reachout to grasp the waiting hand of a fellow traveler.  In the monthsfollowing her husband’s sudden death, Sally Rosenthal explored her reactions toloss and came to realize that strength is a synergetic wisdom woven from thelove passed on through the examples of relatives and beloved animals.  Inpoems and prose, she shares what she has learned about survival and resilience. Sit with Sally at her kitchen table and share the journey.




 


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