[Critique Group 1] Cleora's october submission

[sitting.duck at springmail.com]

63 words
elevator pitch for Legend of Sly duck
I'm currently working on a story about a visually impaired duck who starts out walking south for the winter because she runs into things when she tries to fly.
On her journey, she befriends a grasshopper, receives an adaptive device to help her fly, and proves her worth by saving a kingdom from an evil monarch.