[Critique Group 1] Sally's March submission...sort of

[Marcia Wick]

OK, I plan to be on the call Wednesday but I’m not submitting anything this month. That way, the meeting may be a bit shorter in case I have to jump off, but I’ll have comments for each of you. Barry’s sister arrives Tuesday so I’ll get a break.

Best,

Marcia

 

From: Sally Rosenthal [mailto:sanford.rosenthal at comcast.net] 
Sent: Sunday, March 28, 2021 11:37 AM
To: 'Deanna Noriega' <dqnoriega at gmail.com>; tuchyner5 at aol.com; 'Marcia Wick' <marciajwick at gmail.com>; group1 at bluegrasspals.com
Subject: FW: Sally's March submission...sort of

 

 

 

From: Sally Rosenthal [mailto:sanford.rosenthal at comcast.net] 
Sent: Sunday, March 28, 2021 1:35 PM
To: 'sitting.duck at springmail.com' <sitting.duck at springmail.com <mailto:sitting.duck at springmail.com> >
Subject: RE: Sally's March submission...sort of

 

Cleora,

Should the poems be in chronological order?

 

Should the poems be in sections according to subject matter?

 

I plan to have an explanatory paragraph before each poem.  Would this work better at the top of the poem or on a facing page?

 

I want to include some prose pieces and scatter them throughout the book.  Any ideas?

Sally

 

From: sitting.duck at springmail.com <mailto:sitting.duck at springmail.com>  [mailto:sitting.duck at springmail.com] 
Sent: Thursday, March 25, 2021 1:32 PM
To: Sally Rosenthal <sanford.rosenthal at comcast.net <mailto:sanford.rosenthal at comcast.net> >
Subject: Re: Sally's March submission...sort of

 

could you give us some questions to think about ahead of time?

Cleora

-----Original Message----- 
From: Sally Rosenthal 
Sent: Mar 24, 2021 5:35 PM 
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Subject: Sally's March submission...sort of 

Hi, everyone,

I hope this is OK, but, rather than submitting anything this month, I would like to use my time picking your brains and getting some different perspectives on the book I am putting together.

Thanks,

Sally

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