[Critique Group 1] August 2020 submission for critique

Deanna Noriega dqnoriega at gmail.com
Wed Aug 19 14:14:13 EDT 2020


Poem, 73 words

 

The Puzzle

By Enzo, 

 

Humans are such a puzzle.

They do many things confusing.

My lady wears a muzzle.

It is not at all amusing.

 

Each time we go out the door,

Does she fear she might bite someone?

She never did that before.

We walk but we don't have much fun.

 

Other folks wear muzzles too.

Perhaps they know showing their teeth,

Is quite a rude thing to do?

Muzzles might hide smiles beneath.

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