[Critique Group 1] Leonard's sub for next week

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Hi Group1,

Below is my poem for critique, and a reminder that your pieces are duje today
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See Better with Zoom

 

 

When you’re blind, go Zoom, and  why? 

I mean, you can’t see. Isn’t that  right?

These two things don’t seem to jive.

 

As leader of  awriting group,

I can see a  teensybit. 

But I’m the only peer who can’t perceive

enough for  me to learna thing.

They crave the image of my visage. 

So, I must abide there pleasantly  smiling.

 

When someone else is telling their tale,

in stealth I sneak  toview the screen,

Nose-to-nose  up closeand personal,

where I can review patterns in their face

and really see them for the first time,

an opportunity not to be shunned. 

 

Sighted people get a feeling of contact, 

beyond all their other human senses. 

Perhaps  not as muchas for their sense of touch. 

My use of Zoom  is mytribute to vision.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
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