[Critique Group 1] Oops, forgot some of the critiques for June

[DQ Noriega]

Leonard,

Plastic Kills

Polluting their organs and hormonesdoesn't flow very well.

Choking their life force and breaking their food chains?

I liked the rest a lot.

 

Sally,

Farewell

Excellent structure and flow.

Captures the pain we shoulder because it would be needlessly cruel and
pointless to distress our fading loved ones.

 

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