[Critique Group 2] reminder

[leonard tuchyner]

Hi group 2,

Reminder that pieces are due Thursday. Mine is below.
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Small World

Someone  smokes a stogie in my abode.

It is enough to pollute the whole house,

spreading through every room and corner.

Perhaps I should locate to a no smoke place.



Someone is burning leaves on my block.

I feel The breeze is unhealthy to breathe.

My eyes are red and my nose wants to sneeze.

Perhaps I should move to a different square.



People are driving too many petrol cars.

The fumes they produce are hard to bear.

I would look crazy wearing a mask --

Time to get out of Dodge and  try the country.



Something has started a forest fire.

The acrid smoke is making me  choke.

Where can I find a good place to breathe?

Possibly pure fresh air in the desert.



Someone is burning up Canada,

California, The West, and all over.

Gotta find a  new planet to move to  --

Maybe the Moon, Mercury,  or Neptune.

Beam me up Scotty, the Earth is too small.