[Critique Group 2] Leonard's comments re: val's piece

[Leonard Tuchyner]

This is an ode to someone. 
There is a  holy aura about her and the way she is loved. 
The last line with the word believe 
adds that other worldliness to her. 
It is a mystery who she is. 
She could be a goddess 
or just someone who  gives the impression. 
She is real and natural. 
Her status is a mystery. 
Maybe she is just a singer 
in the church who expresses the beautiful aspects wich are a mystery to her. As well. 


Val sub for June 23


 I listen to her sing,
her  sweet soprano fills the small
sanctuary with peace.
In total humility, her gifts of wisdom and kindness are genuine down to earth.

I love her fromm my spirit  and soul
with all the joy i possess

She is real and warm, beautiful.
natural.

I listen, discern trust her.

I believe, too.

8dalerie Moreno
 6-14, 2023
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