[Critique Group 2] Leonard's comments on Val's sub

[Leonard Tuchyner]

Val sub for Dec 22

 

 

Baby

A time of darkness has within it a splinter of hope forchange.  

If she can see the world from the point of view of a newbornchild,, 

the world will be transformed into  brightness. 

A beautiful thought and conception. 

 

A splinter of hope in desolate dark,

a wish of change in teaming uncertainty.

Bright arrival of quiet purity

resides in tiny heart of a newborn child.

 




 
 
Leonard I. Tuchyner, Author
 
https://www.dldbooks.com/tuchyner/

 
  
 
 

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