[Critique Group 2] Prayer for the Dawning.docx For 2-23-23 Group-2/BC

[jamesstarfire at gmail.com]

Prayer for the Dawning

C Brad Corallo

Word count 93

 

As night creeps, inexorably 

toward the inevitability of dawn, 

we are Finally able to exhale.

 

Built up nocturnal tensions shrink

seeming to slowly retreat , catfooted. 

 

Our astonishing gift, The new day, 

slowly unfolds its petals

equally, for all to partake. 

 

The waxing light

pale at first 

but with expanding intensity 

begins to outline and illuminate

the fragile bloom of hope.  

 

May it always be so

to light the way for

our disappointing, blindly struggling  

pathetic species .

And the promise of 

all its rainbow potential! 

 

jamesstarfire at gmail.com

 

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