[Critique Group 2] critique group two 9-29-22

[Valerie Moreno]

Breakdown

Breakdown
two weeks ago
or a lifetime.

Hard sound
fading light
plunge in to cracking
shattered spirit.

Survival
after cataclizmic 
undoing is grace.

Slowly
coming back
is a new dawn--

I am here
I love
I crumble
I stand again

Frailty is openness
need is freedom
realization is healing
hope is born of these.

Valerie Moreno
Our body is not made of iron, our strength not that of stone. Live and
hope in the Lord and let your service be according to reason.
-Clare of Assisi
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