[Critique Group 2] In case you didn't get my submission

[Leonard Tuchyner]

Leonard I. Tuchyner, Author
 
https://www.dldbooks.com/tuchyner/
 
  
 
 




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From: Leonard Tuchyner <tuchyner5 at aol.com>
To: group2 at bluegrasspals.com <group2 at bluegrasspals.com>
Sent: Wed, Oct 19, 2022 10:14 am
Subject: Fwd: reminder: ieces are due tomorrow.



Hi group2,

Just a reminder that your submissions are due tomorrow.  Mine is below.

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Wouldn’t it Be Lovely 

 

I witness this diminished landscape 

and see houses where once there were  trees --

tarmac driveways where once there were scrubs.

Now neighbors replace the woolly woods. 

 

Though there is something to be said for neighbors, 

I miss the quiet noise of wilderness,

like the cacophony of geese in flight,

rather than the clamor of leaf blowers,

or the harsh roar of lawn mowers. 

 

Straight- lined roofs sans the soft blur of arbors, 

and the sterile boxy shapes of houses, 

do not rest quietly in my spirit. 

 

Wouldn’t it be lovely to plant a tree,

bushes, flowers and other flora, 

to provide shade and respite for our eyes --

to clear our polluted air of carbon 

and baffle the noises we live in?

If only the neighbors would listen.

 

Wouldn’t it be lovely? 

 




 
 
Leonard I. Tuchyner, Author
 
https://www.dldbooks.com/tuchyner/

 
  
 
 

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