[Critique Group 2] Joan's real piece for November

[Joan Myles]

My Father's Music

by Joan Myles


my father’s breath

is a song barely

rising above the pillow case

pale white

in the white hush

of white darkness

my father’s breath

Rumbles deep dark

hidden melodies

solitary

phantoms even

to himself

hand-built

Rhythms

 Wordless

whispering

white wisps

 no prayer

no promise no

Purpose merely a sigh

the long slow longing

After ascent

into blue

my father’s breath

breathes in me

a solitary song

rising
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